I like the story development, and its timing is prefect.
Thungramgin rocks. She’s really gone out on a limb for Emily.
And, aha! That’s why Emily should stay away from the window! She’s dangerously anthropohedral!
And I love the trippy, underground-comix surrealism of your world. Cities are carried by giant dog-like things that snort crushed up people. People travel by conveyor lawns under polka-dot skies. Men are REAL men, and women just look like them! Day and night are sudden and perilous. Curses cause giant stone lightning bolts to spring from cities! Zowie!
Yet despite all this weirdness, what bugs me the most happened back on Earth: Why did the people in the car seem to know Emily?
I like the story development, and its timing is prefect.
Thungramgin rocks. She’s really gone out on a limb for Emily.
And, aha! That’s why Emily should stay away from the window! She’s dangerously anthropohedral!
And I love the trippy, underground-comix surrealism of your world. Cities are carried by giant dog-like things that snort crushed up people. People travel by conveyor lawns under polka-dot skies. Men are REAL men, and women just look like them! Day and night are sudden and perilous. Curses cause giant stone lightning bolts to spring from cities! Zowie!
Yet despite all this weirdness, what bugs me the most happened back on Earth: Why did the people in the car seem to know Emily?
Wow, that is a mouth full. I can’t even find a definition for “anthropohedral.”
enjoying the story bits a lot, Eldon!
Wow, lots going on here – great stuff Eldon.
ah, the plot is getting clearer… or not?