I’m thinking that this is all supposed to be internal monologue. In my mind the little speech bubble style bits that normally indicate who is speaking confuse the issue. For me the last panel and the bottom of the next-to-last panel are clearly her thinking to herself. Maybe it’s just me, because I would probably be speaking out loud to myself.
I love the monologue here. She’s covering a lot of thoughts that some of us have had already, and honestly trying to piece facts together. It’s also a major bit of character development for her, as she’s actively trying to think through her predicament instead of just doing what people tell her.
I love the way her thought process works. Not just another mindless hero that can’t put two and two together, she’s voicing some of my own thoughts. ‘Course then she dismisses them, but still- it’s nice to have a protagonist that can think on a higher level.
Also, beautiful page, and I like the way she’s rifling through the debris to get random objects. :3 Much fun.
XD always good to consider that your living nightmare isn’t real.
I’m thinking that this is all supposed to be internal monologue. In my mind the little speech bubble style bits that normally indicate who is speaking confuse the issue. For me the last panel and the bottom of the next-to-last panel are clearly her thinking to herself. Maybe it’s just me, because I would probably be speaking out loud to myself.
I will confirm that the dialogue here is internal.
That should be “conscience” not “conscious” in the second-to-last panel. Also, what’s with the quotes around the number of comments?
Thanks for the correction Nathaniel. I dunno about the quotation marks around the comments.You would have to ask my comicpress pal Phil about it.
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I love the monologue here. She’s covering a lot of thoughts that some of us have had already, and honestly trying to piece facts together. It’s also a major bit of character development for her, as she’s actively trying to think through her predicament instead of just doing what people tell her.
I love the way her thought process works. Not just another mindless hero that can’t put two and two together, she’s voicing some of my own thoughts. ‘Course then she dismisses them, but still- it’s nice to have a protagonist that can think on a higher level.
Also, beautiful page, and I like the way she’s rifling through the debris to get random objects. :3 Much fun.
thank you sir, kindly for the colourful update! it’s fantastic.